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Nothing broken
Verse1I'm holding on to the misconception That a broken heart will someday mendSo I dance around the truth and tell myself it's all in my headChorus Cause nothing's ever truly brokenIf there's a will then there is a wayWith the right set of toolsI can make the pain go away(repeat)Verse2Cowardly it may seem to dodge the truth And live a lie but I'll indulge my oppositions And tell myself it's all in my mindChorus Cause nothing's ever truly brokenIf there's a will then there is a wayWith the right set of toolsI can make the pain go away(repeat)BridgeIf what I believe is true and realThen there is nothing I can't doSo I'll pick up the pieces and start to healChorusCause nothing's ever truly brokenIf there's a will then there is a wayWith the right set of tools I can make the pain go away
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Sorry arty I get what you were saying about V1 and V2 It was not intentional I have made the corrections thanks again
Thanks arty for the critique I really do appriciate it after that's what this forum s all about. The choice of words in the lyric illustrates how my family is handling the fact that I am gone. First deployment that we as a family has had to face and she my wife has never dealt with being alone with two kids so that's the reason for the verbiage. And yeah the four line verses are a little abstract but I'm finding it hard to add to them. And lastly the chorus has a lot of na na na s after the last line of it to the rhythm of the ballad with a "my desert lullaby " repeated every so often.
Desert lullaby
With these wordsI send my loveWith every verse And scribbled lineI leave s piece of me behindThere's a fear of being alone But try to find comfort in my songAnd sing along to my desert lullabyWith these chords I send my loveWith ever note and hammer onI leave a piece of me behindThere's a fear of losing controlBut try to find comfort in my song And sing along to my desert lullaby
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