Anyway, I rambled too long in that last post. Here are the NEW updated lyrics:verse1: Another night all aloneI sit on my couch and droneabout how it's unfair that you're with himI didn't go to the danceDon't want cheap talk and romanceand to see you in a crowd with someone elseit's safe to say that I need a house call but the doc's a broken record that only plays the same sad song(chorus)So doc please say it ain't soOr else I will have to goSpend all my nights eating fast foodYeah, doc I know It ain't good but if you were me you wouldKnow why I can't get her off my nightstandverse 2This hell is not very funplus I've been stuck here for monthsand ever since then I've become jaded and numbSometimes I feel a stingmost times I don't feel a thingand It sucks because I don't want this no morePre chorus2:Now I'm like a record that's stuck in a grooveNo matter what I do i'm always coming back to you(chorus)I might add a bridge or third verse. I'm not sure yet. Nonetheless, here's an updated version of the song. What are your thought's on it so far?

Sup, Carl, I like the suggestions your throwing out here. I'm smelling what you're stepping in man. As of today, I met with my band and we wrote a little bit more to the song than whats here. But before I get to that, I guess I should preface somethings. This song is about a few experiences that happened to me my senior year of high school, and for the most part your interpretation of the story is correct. Guy likes girl, but girl is at dance with another person. The whole doctor part goes like this, I remember having long talks with my dad(Who's a doctor) about these girl issues I was having and he would recommend just moving on and letting go every time we'd talk. Also like I said before, the song is about just accepting bad new for what it is. I like the idea's you're giving me. I considered the route of just writing about how I can't get the girl out of my head, but I wanted to go for something more personal. I feel that would help make the song resonate with others a little better. I still might switch it to "head" or something like that instead of night stand. As for the jaded and numb line. I know that it's a bit contradictory, but even when in that sort of state if you ever do start to come out of it, the only feeling that you'll ever really find(most of the time) is sadness of a person leaving you. Not sure if that makes any sense, but just put yourself in the shoes of a youth who has just been dumped. Maybe then some of this might make a little more sense?? Hey, but thanks for the advice, man! 

Thanks for the advice, Carl. I guess I have to take a lot of that into consideration to actually make a song that MAKES SENSE. I mean it all kind of came out as me just writing the first things I could think of onto a piece of paper, so there's that. Ehh. But that's probably just a lame excuse for continuity errors. So maybe instead of just saying, "turn the tables on me" make it "turning the table as you start kissing me"? So then it'd be implying two stupid teens kissing, the boy being swept off his feet already, and then the girl whispers in his ear thus giving meaning to the chorus. Yeah. Something like that. And Larry, thanks for the compliment! I won't let you down, man! 

Hey thanks, man! Glad to hear my rambling isn't too annoying!

Cassie Thomas said...I can do either, but I tend to lean to lyrics, I'd love some one to give me a beat I can work off.I'd be down for collab, bro. I just need a little info on what sort of music you'd be planning on making. Y'know? Just to make sure things will go smoothly if the opportunity rises.