Dennis. Wow! Very heartfelt and moving. If this is about a real woman, you are blessed to have them in your life. If not, you've shown great ability to connect with a character. Some things...
Washed our clothes in a moping pal
Should be 'mopping pail'
If it wasn’t for your prayers mama I wouldn’t be where I’m are... This isn't proper grammar...
Nice song!
Angelo
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