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Jonathan San German
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Thanks for the advice, Carl. I guess I have to take a lot of that into consideration to actually make a song that MAKES SENSE. I mean it all kind of came out as me just writing the first things I could think of onto a piece of paper, so there's that. Ehh. But that's probably just a lame excuse for continuity errors. 

So maybe instead of just saying, "turn the tables on me" make it "turning the table as you start kissing me"? 
So then it'd be implying two stupid teens kissing, the boy being swept off his feet already, and then the girl whispers in his ear thus giving meaning to the chorus. Yeah. Something like that. 

And Larry, thanks for the compliment! I won't let you down, man!