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Dan Lamons
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After many behind the scenes discussions with OD and numerous rewrites with us responding one to the other with many flattering names, this one ended up as, It Can't Be Mine.     Here's a link to my progress. The harp fills and the vox will be redone and I hope to add some electric guitar, i have only been playing acoustic for a few years and I haven't plugged in sometime, my skills are very lacking.
 I'm still open to adding more lyrics. I added extra length to the song for that purpose.  All input is appreciated. Thanks in advance

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13167072

Livin the life everything was fine
Had no worries thought you were mine
Then came the day the car broke down
A tow truck driver came to the house

Behind my back you was seeing him
He's stealin yo love I'm payin the rent
Was my first taste of bein the fool
Your knocked up now we're all thru

Chorus

I've been workin day and night
U know it's his it can't be mine
Come on baby don't be lyin
U know it's his it can't be mine
I'm all crazy me oh my
Cuse me folks while I lose my mind

Instrumental Break

This is where it all unwinds
You done broke the tie that binds
You and me baby we all thru
Don't blame me it's all on you

Chorus

I've been workin day and night
U know it's his it can't be mine
Come on baby don't be lyin
U know it's his it can't be mine
I'm all crazy me oh my
Cuse me folks while I lose my mind