One day I woke up,
  • and saw that you were, gone.
  • Now everyday I wake up,
  • still tryin to move, on.
  • I tried to lose your memory,
  • in a glass of, any kind.
  • Instead I sat and thought of you,
  • till I slowly lost, my mind.
  • And it doesn't seem to matter,-----
  • What I say or,..do.
  •  I'm still lonely----,
  • Yeah I'm still lonely---,
  • With out, you.
  • I could go out with my friends,
  • a different party, every night.
  • I could smile and laugh,
  • pretend,...everythings alright.
  •  Or I could find a lover,
  • right now, I could take him home .
  • But it wouldn't make a difference.
  • Cause, I'd still sleep, alone.
  • And it doesn't seem to matter,----
  • What I say or,...do.
  • Cause I'm still lonely,---
  •  Yeah I'm still  lonely-----
  • With out,you.
  • (guitar solo)
  •  No, it doesn't seem to matter,---
  • What I say or,...do.
  • Cause I'm still lonely,---
  • Oh I'm still so lonely----
  • With out....you.  
  • Ott Lukk
    #1
    "lonely", and "without you", are universal sentiments. Nice clean write; the success of lyrics like these depends heavily on the singer and the production. It fits into the "poor, poor pitiful me" genre, which sells well on a continuous basis!  Ott
    billie kay taylor
    #2
    I do know lonely LOL. Thanks. I don't sing or play instrument, but I hear everything in my head.
    Jonathan San German
    #3
    Dude! This is some really solid stuff you've got here! Like, I don't know why you're posting this in the incomplete lyrics forum. This thing sounds like it's done and ready to be taken out of the oven!! Great job! Absolutely love it!
    billie kay taylor
    #4
    Hey, Thanks. I'm trying to learn more and the people in here are really helpful.
    Larry Killam
    #5
    Enjoyed Da read .Like what U have.Would love to hear it.
    David Sanchez
    #6
    The simplicity and honesty of this is beautiful.