Great title and very nice lyric. I'm looking for something to pick apart here and can't find it. Lol
Ok nit pick - Use of the word "your" in many of the lines should be " you're". Maybe just a typo. Exceptions - When you talk in your sleep & Whose on your mind.
We use to be , We used to be
Otherwise In the Dark is good to go in my thoughts.
Everything you've posted is fairly easy to sing & looks ready for a collaborator to put music to.
Cheers,
Carl
Ok nit pick - Use of the word "your" in many of the lines should be " you're". Maybe just a typo. Exceptions - When you talk in your sleep & Whose on your mind.
We use to be , We used to be
Otherwise In the Dark is good to go in my thoughts.
Everything you've posted is fairly easy to sing & looks ready for a collaborator to put music to.
Cheers,
Carl
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