I"M STILL LONELY ( country/blues)

One day I woke up,

and saw that you were, gone.

Now everyday I wake up,

still tryin to move, on.

I tried to lose your memory,

in a glass of, any kind.

Instead I sat and thought of you,

till I slowly lost, my mind.

And it doesn't seem to matter,-----

What I say or,..do.

 I'm still lonely----,

Yeah I'm still lonely---,

With out, you.

I could go out with my friends,

a different party, every night.

I could smile and laugh,

pretend,...everythings alright.

 Or I could find a lover,

right now, I could take him home .

But it wouldn't make a difference.

Cause, I'd still sleep, alone.

And it doesn't seem to matter,----

What I say or,...do.

Cause I'm still lonely,---

 Yeah I'm still  lonely-----

With out,you.

(guitar solo)

 No, it doesn't seem to matter,---

What I say or,...do.

Cause I'm still lonely,---

Oh I'm still so lonely----

With out....you.  

Great emotional imagery. Enjoyed this, very relatable.

Ahhh I got 7 guitars already, so give mine to charity ok? LOL

Very nicely written and very relateable to many people, My only suggestion would be to identify your verses and chorus for the reader other than that great job

Billie, some nice lines. It sounds somehow familiar! Ott

had a melody going from first line hope it gets music and posted would be nice to hear .

john