John, thank you for your comments here. :)
(You're right about Whiter Shade of Pale. Gorgeous song, and entirely cryptic. Killer hook! 
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)Meanwhile, I've made an adjustment to the bridge. I never felt 100% happy with the 'corporate ladder' image. It seemed too narrow a focus. I think the notion of a 'breaking' ladder is more universal. It could apply to any situation.
Thoughts, anyone?
Donna
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