Truth be told I'm over it
These constant battles
Never seem to end
All this fighting
Has left me numb
And after all the talking's done

We lie awake next to
The broken memories
Of our past
But if we try
And make it through
These next few days
Won't be our last

I can see the
Sarcasm in your eyes
It speaks to me
Louder than anything
There's a voice
Behind those eyes
That's constantly screaming
And after all
The talking's done

We lie awake
Next to the
Broken memories
Of our past
But if we try and
Make it through
These next few days
Won't be our last

I've always wondered why
How can we change our fate
To break these habits
And survive another day

And after all the talking's done
We lie awake
Next to
The broken memories
Of our past
But if we try
and make it through
These next few days
Won't be our last
No these next few days
Won't be our last
Wes Tibbets
#1
Hi,

You have a pretty good thing going on here. The structure is pretty good and the rhyme scheme is fair. The syllable count is a little off between the verses but overall, you did a nice job. Good luck with it!