I've read in "how to" books the idea that every listener has their own internal interpretation/reation to the lines. So , it goes, the writer must be kind to his reader...
What I wanted to know, and what I found my mind looking for clues for, was what happened to split these two people apart?
Why can't the writer just get another picture sent email or something? Maybe she died? maybe they broke up? maybe she hates him he still loves her?
Just some ideas. Maybe its already good as is....because it leaves the listener curious.
Bill
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