I did a 3rd rewrite based on suggestions I was given on here and other sites.I don't know if I fixed some of the issues or not. The rewrite is below the original in RED. CBelow it is a link to an acapella demo of the idea of it. I ran it by a friend of mine tonight and off the top of his head, he saw it in a G-C9th-G-D all the way through with the exception of an A flat in the chorus.I don't know if that is right because I can't play guitar. And I can't sing well either. So you've been warned. Constructive comments, suggestions, crits and collabs are welcomed and appreciated.
VERSE ONE
You still haunt me day by day
I wish thoughts of you would go away
I surrendered to you heart and soul
But these mind games are growing old
CHORUS
So what are you doing in my head
When you’re no longer lying in my bed
Don’t you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
VERSE TWO
We’ve both gone our separate ways
There's nothing left for us to say
You didn’t like me, I couldn't stand you
I thought we agreed that we were through
CHORUS
So what are you doing in my head
When you’re no longer lying in my bed
Don’t you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
BRIDGE
When you left you took your things
So what do you want with my dreams
CHORUS
What are you doing in my head
When you’re no longer lying in my bed
Don’t you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
TAG
What are you doing in my head
Girl, what are you doing in my head
What Are You Doing In My Head
Copyright 2016 by Wes Tibbets
VERSE ONE
I miss you since you've been gone
I think about where we went wrong
I surrendered to you heart and soul
But this heartache is growing old
CHORUS
So what are you doing in my head
When you're no longer lying in my bed
Don't you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
VERSE TWO
I remember the day you walked away
All the mean things we had to say
You wouldn't touch me, I wouldn't touch you
We were both glad that we were through
CHORUS
So what are you doing in my head
When you're no longer lying in my bed
Don't you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
BRIDGE
When you left you took everything
So what do you want with my dreams
CHORUS
What are you doing in my head
When you're no longer lying in my bed
Don't you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
TAG
What are you doing in my head
Girl, what are you doing in my head
Copyright 2016 by Wes Tibbets
VERSE ONE
I miss you since you've been gone
I think about where we went wrong
I surrendered to you heart and soul
But this heartache is growing old
CHORUS
So what are you doing in my head
When you're no longer lying in my bed
Don't you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
VERSE TWO
I remember the day you walked away
All the mean things we had to say
You wouldn't touch me, I wouldn't touch you
We were both glad that we were through
CHORUS
So what are you doing in my head
When you're no longer lying in my bed
Don't you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
BRIDGE
When you left you took everything
So what do you want with my dreams
CHORUS
What are you doing in my head
When you're no longer lying in my bed
Don't you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
TAG
What are you doing in my head
Girl, what are you doing in my head
3RD REWRITE
VERSE ONE
You still haunt me day by day
I wish thoughts of you would go away
I surrendered to you heart and soul
But these mind games are growing old
CHORUS
So what are you doing in my head
When you’re no longer lying in my bed
Don’t you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
VERSE TWO
We’ve both gone our separate ways
There's nothing left for us to say
You didn’t like me, I couldn't stand you
I thought we agreed that we were through
CHORUS
So what are you doing in my head
When you’re no longer lying in my bed
Don’t you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
BRIDGE
When you left you took your things
So what do you want with my dreams
CHORUS
What are you doing in my head
When you’re no longer lying in my bed
Don’t you have somewhere to be instead
What are you doing in my head
What are you doing in my head
TAG
What are you doing in my head
Girl, what are you doing in my head
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