Hey, Wes!
I think you're probably right, especially if your goal is to have a recording with a commercial interest in mind. If it's not written or sung with a lady in mind, it more than likely won't fare well. or......(Now here's a long shot) You could turn the perspective around and make the lead character the woman and the guy takes the house, kids and cash. It's not as common but it can and does happen from time to time. I once knew a guy I worked with who managed to get alimony from his ex wife.
Anyway, what you've got in the way of lyrics is good. : ) When you finalize things and have music, please share with us.
Carl
I think you're probably right, especially if your goal is to have a recording with a commercial interest in mind. If it's not written or sung with a lady in mind, it more than likely won't fare well. or......(Now here's a long shot) You could turn the perspective around and make the lead character the woman and the guy takes the house, kids and cash. It's not as common but it can and does happen from time to time. I once knew a guy I worked with who managed to get alimony from his ex wife.
Anyway, what you've got in the way of lyrics is good. : ) When you finalize things and have music, please share with us.
Carl
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