Hi Carl, Thank you for your insights and ideas. I see what you mean! Your help is just what I needed. I will continue on then with the song and eventually marry it up with hopefully with the proper melody. When I get it finished I will put it on Open Micl
Again, your help is deeply appreciated! And if you don't mind please feel free anytime I post lyrics or a full song to give me the kind of feedback that will help me grow. I am serious about the spark that will hopefully become a flame, and there's nothing like having a genuine critique!
Jackie
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