Grasping Straws

I been working on this one for awhile. it's about a dying person from their point of view.
The song title is not in the lyrics on this 1. I also did a take a sip and let it rip cut no meter just bangin it out on the box.
 I appreciate everyone's input. Thanks.

Here's the link.    https://app.box.com/s/byxcan9d9vcfbm52t9l2d09shp2g8d4d


Intro

Somedays are good
Somedays are bad
Somedays Im just sad

Shine on me light show me whats right
In my search for a cure
I don't wanna fuss but I got to fight
I want to make it thru.

And the man on the tube sais I got it right here
I'm reachin for my wallet we prayin Im healed

We all pray as its going down the drain
Ain't no place to be between the prayers and the pain
It's heaven and hell right here on earth
Love,hate and tears and back to the dirt
We all pray as its going down the drain
Ain't no place to be between the prayers and the pain

Instrumental break

The Insurance won't pay n I can't stay
They'll be sending me home
I know it's clicque and I cant help but think
I'll probably die alone

And the man on the tube sais I got it right here
I'm reachin for my wallet we prayin Im healed

We all pray as its going down the drain
Ain't no place to be between the prayers and the pain
It's heaven and hell right here on earth
Love,hate and tears and back to the dirt

Short Instr fill

It's heaven and hell right here on earth
Love,hate and tears mommas givin birth