Billie
some interesting writing going on here, the layout is confusing lol
May just suggest that the crying in the rain line is probably a little cliche now and as they keep telling us to try and find new ways to tell to make it fresh.
As a suggestion or what the hell I mean LOL,
When i come in from the rain, the drops still fall until i get to sleep
The other thing to watch to watch are such things as in the early lines you state you keep the hurt inside, this is then contradicted by the rest of song, change or remove, maybe I've tried to...
Be interested to see how it looks like the maker intended!
Arty
some interesting writing going on here, the layout is confusing lol
May just suggest that the crying in the rain line is probably a little cliche now and as they keep telling us to try and find new ways to tell to make it fresh.
As a suggestion or what the hell I mean LOL,
When i come in from the rain, the drops still fall until i get to sleep
The other thing to watch to watch are such things as in the early lines you state you keep the hurt inside, this is then contradicted by the rest of song, change or remove, maybe I've tried to...
Be interested to see how it looks like the maker intended!
Arty
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