I feel like a part may be missing but the feeling is there.


Looking up towards a never ending sky

my mind drifts endlessly as clouds pass me by

my burning soul never fading

as I look for a new tomorrow

The joys in life are always meant to share



What It brings me I never know

even if i loose site of my dreams

The skies are always open

for a new star shines every night



But what am I looking for now

I'm not too sure

I will always move forwards

Looking for new beginnings



One day I will find it

Heading straight towards new dreams
A new breeze is in the air

blowing in the open fields

full of wild flowers



More days will pass me by

But each day I will enjoy

With family and friends

Even though times will fade

New ones are always coming
Bill Draper
#1
I like the brightness of the words...I'd say find a melody centered on the hook "wild flowers'.....and sing it like a mantra meditating on the syllables....and then add all the other imagery as support (verses).

Good read!

Bill 
L. James Tanner
#2
You can feel the heart in these words, and I enjoyed it very much. The only advice I would give is to use the hook "Wild Flowers" a little more to hone in on the thought. Great start without a doubt.