Hey, James
Welcome back. Hope you're doing well. I like this one. In fact it's one of my favorites from the entries on another site's lyric contest. : )
I like the images. Yes, modeling world is harsh and the things people will do or have to do to get something in return is often beyond one's limit. I can only imagine. Only thing I might alter is the last line of the chorus. Do you need it? Feels, sings with more stability and closure to the chorus if you end it with... "Who's reality's never seen", but perhaps you had a particular vision or rhythmic flow in mind. To me it sounds better when I sing it with 4 lines in the chorus instead of 5.
Carl
Welcome back. Hope you're doing well. I like this one. In fact it's one of my favorites from the entries on another site's lyric contest. : )
I like the images. Yes, modeling world is harsh and the things people will do or have to do to get something in return is often beyond one's limit. I can only imagine. Only thing I might alter is the last line of the chorus. Do you need it? Feels, sings with more stability and closure to the chorus if you end it with... "Who's reality's never seen", but perhaps you had a particular vision or rhythmic flow in mind. To me it sounds better when I sing it with 4 lines in the chorus instead of 5.
Carl
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