Dennis Wright

Song title/ ‘’ When a man cries’’

© 2016

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Vs. 1:

When a man finds a good woman

He will take her love for granted

Lie and cheat run around in the street

Then come home like he did nothing wrong



Vs.2:

He whisper sweet things in her ear

Tell her all the things that she likes to hear

Saying that she’s the only one for him

And all the time he’s been seeing somebody else



Chorus:

But when he finds out that

She’s been doing the same thing too

It breaks his heart into

I wonder what is going through his mind

When a man cries



Vs. 3:

When a man thinks that a woman can’t live without him

That’s when they true colors begin to show

They’ll walk out on you when you need them the most

It makes them feel good when they are in control



Bridge:

But when the tables turn

And the shoe is on the other foot

You reaped what you sowed

It don’t feel so good



Chorus:

When he found out that

She’s been doing the same thing too

It breaks his heart into

I wonder what is going through his mind

When a man cries























Chris Brownell
#1
Dennis, take a look at this article. It has good advice for any songwriter.


The section entitled “Telling Instead of Showing” could help you out with this song. Instead of flat out saying the man cheated on his woman and that she did the same to him, tell a story in which these events play out a bit more subtly.

Just a thought.
Dennis Wright
#2
Thank you for your advice and for commenting. I really appreciate it. Still striving to be the best.
Practice makes perfect. Dennis
Larry Killam
#3
Enjoyed Da Read Dennis.Like it a lot .Keep at it my friend.
Dennis Wright
#4
Thank you buddy! Dennis
Larry Killam
#5
U welcome Dennis.