Still absorbing the Nice, France attack by another chickenshit terrorist and had to vent:

UPDATE:  I threw together a quick demo.  Now, I am not a hippy-hoppity kinda guy, so please be gentle!!  The genre just seemed to fit the song.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/gaip68sz1zqho7h/Die%20On%20My%20Feet%20-%207_16_16%2C%2012.51%20PM.mp3?dl=0

Blood running in the street

New York, London, Paris under fire

Attacks by coward demons from hell

Tension tight as a piano wire



Followers of a false prophet

Killing raping those that can’t resist

Hundreds of thousands suffering

Helpless before evils bloody fist



The time is now to fight this satan

We cannot wait another day

This hellish fire is spreading

If we do not stand together they’ll wipe us all away



They say “We must destroy the infidel

Believe the book of death

Anyone not with us

Rip away their final breath”

This is the mind of the massacring kind

Let’s take the fight to them kick their behind

Want to go to Allah? We’ll set up the meet

I won’t live on my knees I’ll die on my feet



Men women children all marked for death

Their vicious hatred knows no bounds

But they only assault the unsuspecting

Not enough balls to meet on even grounds



But some of us won’t turn away and ignore

All the liberties you bastards have taken

I’ll change your mind wind an ounce of lead

And plug the hole in your empty head with bacon 


They say “We must destroy the infidel

Believe the book of death

Anyone not with us

Rip away their final breath”

This is the mind of the massacring kind

Let’s take the fight to them kick their behind

Want to go to Allah? We’ll set up the meet

I won’t live on my knees I’ll die on my feet 
Larry Killam
#1
Enjoyed Da Read.Da only thing I would changed is Satan to Demon.All Da Best with it.
Carl B
#2
Powerful read. I too feel your pain & anger, Chuck. What just happened in France was awful.

I agree with Larry, demon works better than Satan.  Either that or  'these demons'. 

The time is now to fight these demons 


Also

But some of us won’t turn away and ignore



All the liberties you bastards have taken  ---   instead of 'you' how about  "these bastards"


I’ll change your mind wind an ounce of lead  "their minds"


And plug the hole in your empty head with bacon    "their empty heads"

Keep or sweep. Timely write! 





Chuck Mann
#3
Demo added with some of your kind suggestions/notions added in.  Thank you!
Carl B
#4
I like it.  Delivers the message. I have one you might find interesting in the same vane. Wondered if putting music to it might interest you? 

I'll post it in this forum.
Chuck Mann
#5
Thanks sir!
I am no professional but will happily give it a shot
Carl B
#6
Thanks!