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Carl B
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Powerful read. I too feel your pain & anger, Chuck. What just happened in France was awful.

I agree with Larry, demon works better than Satan.  Either that or  'these demons'. 

The time is now to fight these demons 


Also

But some of us won’t turn away and ignore



All the liberties you bastards have taken  ---   instead of 'you' how about  "these bastards"


I’ll change your mind wind an ounce of lead  "their minds"


And plug the hole in your empty head with bacon    "their empty heads"

Keep or sweep. Timely write!