I'll Be Doing All Right

I may not Know

Every thing that I should

But I'm getting by just fine

I may not have done

Every thing that I could

But the stars and sun still shine

So if you come around

Don't bring me down

I don't want to hear your bla bla bla



Chorus



I'll be doing all right

Without your excitation's

I'll be doing just fine

Without your solititations of right



I'm may be slow

Every now and again

I'll keep working on my fast

I can loss my cool

Every time I'm a pain

But I'm sure that it won't last

So if you come around

Don't bring me down

I don't want to hear your bla bla bla



Repeat chorus



The sun gonna shine

Rains gonna fall

i'll be doing just fine

Though it all







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In my song writing, I'm a perfect rhymer and I'm working to step outside that box.  With that said, I honestly have a difficult time with your lyrics and would like to know if you've finished this song so I can hear what it sounds like.  I don't mean any offense by what I'm saying to you, but that I'm actually stuck in a box and you've written outside the box.

here's my help on it, if I was writing it this is how it would be, the chorus needs lots of work too, it has potential