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Gerald Wiebe
#33

So I played with this one a little. This  mp3 track, warts and all, is only verse one and a chorus and you might have to read along because my vocal is less than good. I was feeling it out while recording. And just for fun I added a whole bunch of "I wonder what this sounds like". LOL I learned the second verse doesn't sing well the way I had hoped so that's not here. Also, if there is a chorus repeat, and an instrumental break, this ends up close to the 3+ minute mark. Do you think a bridge is still needed or should the bridge be the inst. break? 


 


http://www.mediafire.com/view/k58iuipuk5j675f/Angel%20In%20Nashville%20part1test.mp3


 


V1 


It was a cold night in Nashville, as she stepped out of the cab
Free spirit, hiding from life 


Huddled on a park bench, holding all she had 


An angel waiting for sunrise 


 


Odds aren’t good today that things are gonna change 


In spite of the things she’s heard them say


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She came to town to make the rounds 


Belting out that Country sound
Thought that stardom could be found 


But all that getting knocked around 


Has left her feeling like a clown 


Turned her smile into a frown 


Put her feet back on the ground