Lyric Writing Game

(Verse One)

 Walked out the door

Just in time to see

An eight foot Sasquatch

Steal my SUV
My jaw was hangin' open

 Tongue 'bout hit the floor

Next thing ya' know

There were two more 

(Chorus)

Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true

Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun

Probably get thrown in jail

 Blame me, say I'm the one 

 (Verse Two) 

Started runnin'

I just had to see

If I could catch a glimpse

To set my mind free

Troubling thoughts and visions

(Verse One)

 Walked out the door

Just in time to see

An eight foot Sasquatch

Steal my SUV
My jaw was hangin' open

Tongue 'bout hit the floor

Next thing ya' know

There were two more 

 (Chorus)

Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true

Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun

Probably get thrown in jail

Blame me, say I'm the one 

 (Verse Two) 

Started runnin' 

I just had to see

If I could catch a glimpse

To set my mind free

Troubling thoughts and visions

Had me thinkin' twice

(Verse One)

 Walked out the door

Just in time to see

An eight foot Sasquatch

Steal my SUV
My jaw was hangin' open

Tongue 'bout hit the floor

Next thing ya' know

There were two more  

 (Chorus)

Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true

Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun

Probably get thrown in jail

Blame me, say I'm the one 

 (Verse Two) 

Started runnin' 

I just had to see

If I could catch a glimpse

To set my mind free

Troubling thoughts and visions

Had me thinkin' twice

Wonder if I catch them

(Verse One)

Walked out the door

Just in time to see

An eight foot Sasquatch

Steal my SUV

My jaw was hangin' open

 Tongue 'bout hit the floor

Next thing ya' know

There were two more  

 (Chorus)

Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true

Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun

Probably get thrown in jail

Blame me, say I'm the one 

 (Verse Two) 

Started runnin' 

I just had to see

If I could catch a glimpse

To set my mind free

Troubling thoughts and visions

Had me thinkin' twice

Wonder if I catch them

Will this end nice

(Verse One)

Walked out the door

Just in time to see

An eight foot Sasquatch

Steal my SUV

My jaw was hangin' open

Tongue 'bout hit the floor

Next thing ya' know

There were two more  

 (Chorus)

Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true

Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun

Probably get thrown in jail

Blame me, say I'm the one  

 (Verse Two) 

Started runnin'

I just had to see

If I could catch a glimpse

To set my mind free

Troubling thoughts and visions

Had me thinkin' twice

Wonder if I catch them

Will this end nice

(bridge)

Can't we all just get along

(Verse One)

Walked out the door

Just in time to see

An eight foot Sasquatch

Steal my SUV

My jaw was hangin' open

Tongue 'bout hit the floor

Next thing ya' know

There were two more  

 (Chorus)

Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true

Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun

Probably get thrown in jail

Blame me, say I'm the one  

 (Verse Two) 

Started runnin'

I just had to see

If I could catch a glimpse

To set my mind free

Troubling thoughts and visions

Had me thinkin' twice

Wonder if I catch them

Will this end nice

(Chorus)

Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true

Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two

Wonder if I should call the cops

Or join in on the fun

Probably get thrown in jail

Blame me, say I'm the one  

 (bridge)

 Can't we all just get along

Forget the crazy stuff with a song

Oh well this one looks exhausted.  

If I had to go back and do it over, I'd retract bigfoot.

Bridge doesn't gel in my book either at least so far.

Any suggestions?

We could go over the whole thing again and change up a few of the lines to make it work.

I like the bigfoot concept. Gives it that "Hey folks, here's the cheesiest song you've heard in a long time" feeling. LOL

I wasn't "getting" the bridge either. I don't think the tune itself is solid enough to be able to effectively add the bridge yet. Just a thought.

This one's your baby so I'll let you make the call.

Hey, Gerald.

Ok bigfoot stays. I just wasn't sure how it would be received. Yes. cheesy was the idea. 

I'm with you. Needs to be stronger first with more story if even a bridge is necessary then.

So, let's just continue and if at any point we want to end it then or change direction do so.

Hmm. Let me think about new lines and where our characters are all headed.  : )

Carl

Yaaaaaaaay - I like Bigfoot

We could humanize them and give them a reason to steal my SUV like their tour bus broke down, or something...

  Now that would be interesting. 

Maybe.... as a bridge?

Overheard one of the guys in the bigfoot suit

Have the bridge reveal that this is all a crazy dream and now everyone thinks I'm nuts?

Overheard one of the guys in the bigfoot suit

Say when are we gonna divide the loot

Gerald I like your idea, but Larry's thought adds dimension too.  I think we could still do a crazy dream thing/ this guy is nuts.

What do you think of still doing the dream thing with what we've got?

Overheard one of the guys in the bigfoot suit

Say when are we gonna divide the loot

MAGIC!!!!!!!!!  Lol

I think I like it. Lol

Carl, you do know that there's meds for that, right? LOL

Lol

How bout' a title?

Something a little different in the chorus. Ties in with the "gone nuts" thing.....

(Chorus)

 Some say they're gorillas

I don't think that's true
Cuz one's behind the wheel

Chasing the other two
Wonder if I should call someone

Or join in on the fun
Probably get locked up

Blame me, say I'm the one  

That works!  Looks good.