Carl B said...
Oh well this one looks exhausted. 
If I had to go back and do it over, I'd retract bigfoot.
Bridge doesn't gel in my book either at least so far.
Any suggestions?
We could go over the whole thing again and change up a few of the lines to make it work.
I like the bigfoot concept. Gives it that "Hey folks, here's the cheesiest song you've heard in a long time" feeling. LOL
I wasn't "getting" the bridge either. I don't think the tune itself is solid enough to be able to effectively add the bridge yet. Just a thought.
This one's your baby so I'll let you make the call.
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