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I have reworked some of the verses and would like to know if it's better or worse then what I had before. I am still tryong to figure out how to improve the chorus.........


 


                                                                       Face Without A Name


 


V1


A leather photo album


On the table in the den


With Memories we've made over the years


Some with family and friends


Before the disease progressed


Now there people that she doesn't know


 


CH1


Pictures of familiar face


Spanning several generations


To her they're all the same


They're faces without a name


 


V2


Some of them show perfectly


How full of life she used to be


A pebble skipping on the pond of life


The more advance she gets


The faster it will progress


A thief taking her memories as it's price


 


CH2


Pictures of familiar faces


Spanning several generations


To her they're all the same


They're faces without a name


 


BR


If the past became today


I'd lover her just the same


And proudly wear the title


A face Without A Name


 


CH3


Pictures of familiar faces


Spanning several generations


To here we're all the same


We're faces without a name


 


 


                                                          Written By


                                                     Robert A Geyer