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Les Service
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Hi Les, I like the song idea. The one thing I would suggest is changing "seeds" to "seed" as plural sounds like 2 people instead of just you.



Hi Larry
Thanks for the read and comment.
Mmmmmm I have to be honest and say I don't see what you are getting at? I'm not being funny here just the line says "Sow "my" seeds" which indicates me as an individual!
Larry I could be and possibly am missing your point! This going to bug me now for quite a while! Lol!

Cheers

Les