Hi Arty
thanks for the read and reply.
I did post this on another site (something I rarely do I usually only post one lyric on one site) and the question I asked was does the form work? i did not get any response to the question, I like to experiment with structure to see how it works and this one can work both ways.
Thanks for your comment and I'm glad there's is something to like about it. I do like the 2 verse then 1 version as well.
Cheers
Les
thanks for the read and reply.
I did post this on another site (something I rarely do I usually only post one lyric on one site) and the question I asked was does the form work? i did not get any response to the question, I like to experiment with structure to see how it works and this one can work both ways.
Thanks for your comment and I'm glad there's is something to like about it. I do like the 2 verse then 1 version as well.
Cheers
Les
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