Thank you Donna for the comprehensive and very helpful critique as well as the book/website information. I am looking forward to seeing what htey have to offer. I had spent a long time away from music and songwriting and am slowly making my way back. There was a golden rule that in order to be commercial, songs had to last under three minutes. Do you know if this is still the case? This song in its original form was longer and the final verse brought the story to a close. Again, thank you, Very helpful!
Angelo
Angelo
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