Dennis .
when you write do you sing the words to yourself ? if you do then the melody in your head fits the words . i think it is what we all do even those who play an instument . that said when someone else reads them they/we have to find our own melody sometimes it is really easy others not. this a not lyric for me . the rhymes don't match ( they don't have to ) and the lines are different lengths so it effects the flow . can see the story but can't sing along to it PO
john
when you write do you sing the words to yourself ? if you do then the melody in your head fits the words . i think it is what we all do even those who play an instument . that said when someone else reads them they/we have to find our own melody sometimes it is really easy others not. this a not lyric for me . the rhymes don't match ( they don't have to ) and the lines are different lengths so it effects the flow . can see the story but can't sing along to it PO
john
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