Tony: Nice write. one suggestion. The lady left. Wouldn't it make more sense for the line in the bridge that reads "I've got to find a way/to never let you get away" to be changed to "I forgot to find a way/to never let you get away"? Forgot indicates that he messed up in the past, and fits better with the rest of the lyrics. Take or discard as you see fit. Ott
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