Thanks for the kind words and suggestions. The biggest problem I've discovered with writing lyrics is that from one person to another, there is a different perception of how the song is supposed to sound. For instance, the way you read it, my syllable count is way off from what you hear in your mind and vice versa. The same problem persists too in collaboration with others. One person sees it differently from another. Therefore, each person corrects it according to their perception of it. I really appreciate you taking the time to read through it and make the suggestions you have. There is some great ideas in there for sure. Best wishes to ya!
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