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Arty Redsocks
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Dennis,
My reply to a Womans work is never done, is well why dont she finish it, now.

Carl has written a whole lot of good stuff and some great suggestions so while I wont go over these again, I will say if this is the story you want to write my suggestion re story board and the short two line Bridge which brings it all together

V1   The things I do for you
Chorus  - womans work is never done
V2  I want it like it was (when you used to help)
Chorus - womans work is never done

Bridge
I tell you one thing if things dont improve
The last job I'm gonna do is pack my bags and leave

Chorus - womans work is never done


More so, see if you can do VCVCBC as this will fly and get to the punch of the Bridge

Arty