A woman's job is never done

I sensed a little cajun in that first verse with the "woman do" aspect. The rest of it read out well and showed some fine writing skills. Although it's not necessary, it does help if you change things up with a bridge that summarizes what you've written so far. Otherwise, you're just saying the same old things in three verses by telling us how she's tired of the things the man does or doesn't do which anger her. In my opinion, walk through that line of thinking in two verses and then in the bridge tell the listener what she's going to do about it. It would tell it like a story and reach a climax. Just my thoughts....keep or sweep. Best of luck with it!