Good stuff you have going on here. I like it. My only nit to the whole thing was this line......
"taught me some gymnastics too"
Gymnastics in the backseat of a 57 Chevy is a little over the top imho. How about something like this instead...KOS....
"taught me a thing or two"
Just a thought. Otherwise, it flowed well and I found a melody in it which is a good attribute for a lyric to have. Good luck with it!
"taught me some gymnastics too"
Gymnastics in the backseat of a 57 Chevy is a little over the top imho. How about something like this instead...KOS....
"taught me a thing or two"
Just a thought. Otherwise, it flowed well and I found a melody in it which is a good attribute for a lyric to have. Good luck with it!
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