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Kristi McKeever
#9
As a father of 4 and a grandfather of 13, I can totally relate to this lyric, as well as remembering being at that age myself. I've read this through twice, and I gotta say, this is a really really good lyric. I'm having trouble finding something to nitpick, so I'm giving up.

My daughter is my baby
But my baby’s now a lady

Killer line, my fav..... But that bridge is very killer. It's worded great and evokes flashbacks to the younger days. The wording is spot on. Top notch lyric Kristi.Kudos


L. James,

Hey, thanks for your generous comments! I'm happy to hear it connects with you as you (especially) would know if it rings true or not being a father and grandfather! I appreciate you reading it and for taking a moment to respond!

Kristi