Wes Tibbets said...
This is an excellent write! I heard a melody in my head as I was reading through it. Your imagery is very good and it flowed seamlessly. I wouldn't change anything. I like it just the way it is. Good luck with it!
Hi Wes,
Nice to meet you. I'm glad to hear you say it flows well and the imagery comes thru. I wrote this during FAWM and one never knows how much work is needed afterward! Thanks for your nice comments and feedback. I really appreciate it!
Kristi
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