Few poems I put music to, recorded on a laptop. Wanted to get an idea of what they might sound like, and to get opinions from other musicians.
Another one to the next one
Another blink of the eye
Silver lines beware
She's an earthquake running
Out of control, Into your head
She climbed my mountain
And jumped off the top
She landed right where
You told her to stop
It's a joke that just won't quit
This wish of mine
I don't think you're ready to look out
a window all fogged up
You're on a train doesn't stop
Until you stop this lieing
A ripple in the water from
the rock I threw to you
But I missed and made a wave
Oh well, she said, oh well
Underneath it all I see
What you failed to hide
Top to bottom falling out
This vision is all mine
But I still hear you
Say that I'm so blind to you
Don't look back while I leave
She said when she was gone
I didn't mean to leave so quick
As I just saw you run
You're not ready to look out
a window that is all fogged up
You're on a train doesn't stop
Until you stop lieing
A ripple in the water from
The rock I threw to you
But I missed and made a wave
Oh well, she said, oh well
oh well, she said, oh well
A summer dress, A midday's rest
One to tell the kids of
A rocky beach, your heart's long reach
I see the flowing field now
Just a bird overhead
You're not ready to look out
a window that is all fogged up
This train doesn't stop
Until you stop this lieing
A ripple in the water from
The rock I threw at you
But I missed and made a wave
Oh well, she said, oh well
Oh well, she said, oh well
Another blink of the eye
Silver lines beware
She's an earthquake running
Out of control, Into your head
She climbed my mountain
And jumped off the top
She landed right where
You told her to stop
It's a joke that just won't quit
This wish of mine
I don't think you're ready to look out
a window all fogged up
You're on a train doesn't stop
Until you stop this lieing
A ripple in the water from
the rock I threw to you
But I missed and made a wave
Oh well, she said, oh well
Underneath it all I see
What you failed to hide
Top to bottom falling out
This vision is all mine
But I still hear you
Say that I'm so blind to you
Don't look back while I leave
She said when she was gone
I didn't mean to leave so quick
As I just saw you run
You're not ready to look out
a window that is all fogged up
You're on a train doesn't stop
Until you stop lieing
A ripple in the water from
The rock I threw to you
But I missed and made a wave
Oh well, she said, oh well
oh well, she said, oh well
A summer dress, A midday's rest
One to tell the kids of
A rocky beach, your heart's long reach
I see the flowing field now
Just a bird overhead
You're not ready to look out
a window that is all fogged up
This train doesn't stop
Until you stop this lieing
A ripple in the water from
The rock I threw at you
But I missed and made a wave
Oh well, she said, oh well
Oh well, she said, oh well
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