Lift me Up © Ian Jolley /John westwood
Keep me in your ordered loop while my world is spinning round
My head is watching clouds go by while your feet are on the ground
Chorus
Lift me up ,Take me far
I hate this shadow Ive become
Lift me up , Im going down take my hand before I drown
Verse-2
Too much pressure in the attic No better relief below
Id like to take a trip somewhere But there's nowhere I can go
Chorus
Lift me up ,Take me far
I cant face this world all alone
Lift me up , Im feeling down
Break my fall before I hit the ground Bridge
I can see it all too clearly I can feel the pressure wave
can you send some help for me I'm not feeling very brave
Chorus
Lift me up Take me far
I cant face this world all alone
Lift me up Im going down take my hand before I drown
Lift me up , Im feeling down
I cant face this world all alone
Lift me up , I feeling down
Break my fall before I hit the ground
Comments from the original posted versions ''
Jerwolf 2008-09-14 | Deep feeling creation. interesting play of sonic backgrounds overlaid on the vocal line. creative indeed... enjoyed it a lot. [Delete] |
Kyleellen 2008-09-14 | Wild, like the lyrics and the spacey feel to the music. The new title is better. Sounds like you are having a lot of creative fun with music. Best Wishes, Ln [Delete] |
Magic 2008-09-15 | The chorus is wonderfully crafted IMO. The original was good but you have managed to word/work it in a way that most of us here are envious of. [Delete] |
telebob 2008-09-15 | I'm not familiar with the original version, so I can only comment on this version (reversion, revision?). Hee hee.. bad joke, I know. I like the overall musical approach, rock overtones with some pop undertones. The chorus is catchy and the lyric is uplifting (no pun intended) and universally applicable. A VeRy GooD CoLLaB. Voted Fave. Cheers and Twangs! T-Bob [Delete] |
jbthegeezer 2008-09-15 | This is a song that has a lot of sophistication, it reminds me of a Pink Floyd song, Thanks. Jerry [Delete] |
RJC 2008-09-15 | Cool stuff gents, dig it! [Delete] |
Beeswing 2008-09-15 | The lyrc and music combine so well here to produce an emotionally charged song...well done guys! [Delete] |
clairejeanne 2008-09-15 | John and Ian , IMO,this is radio ready . An excellent job by both of you . Clairejeanne [Delete] |
geediane 2008-09-15 | Nice job!! Great feel - awesome vocals. NICE!! [Delete] |
dillon 2008-09-16 | Liked the lyric and melody. A creative production. The background give the song a character of its own. At times it seems to me a little distracting, but at others it builds the feeing to a higher plane. [Delete] |
angie 2008-09-16 | Strong emotion here, John and Ian! Music and lyrics make a good match. I like the sound of your vocals, Ian. Good collab! [Delete] |
JAS 2008-09-20 | This is great under the phones ~ maybe my speakers just were not picking up all the nuances ~ cool song [Delete] |
lps45s8tracks 2008-10-16 | (;AWESOME TITLE;)Drew me right in.Enjoyed the listen.Love it.Great atmophere.Your Songramp Bro.~(;Yrral Mallik;) [Delete] |
Lonnie 2011-12-17 | nice deep lyrics here good all da way around [Delete] |