This is a rough work tape of a cowrite I'm working on and we are looking for some feed back/suggestions before polishing it up to send off for a final full band demo. We're thinking of increasing the tempo slightly, maybe cutting back the into and breaks a little? but it will sound different with some lead guitar in those breaks too. Any comments or suggestions greatly appreciated.
Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans
(c) Colleen Laylon, words, Bobby Nichols, music, BMI, 2011
V1
It's five o'clock, on friday night
you're in a race, with ev'ry traffic light
Dyin' to get home, and get your sexy on
Paint your face, work it like a beauty queen...
It's time for.......... Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans..
Chorus
I love Cold Beer.... and Skinny Jeans....
they go together like corn bread and pinto beans
Gonna get juiced up, watchin' em shake their butts
Yeah gimme, gimme, gimme, gimme.........Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans
V2
At the bar, we're gettin' lit
you're all that, and a bag a tater chips
Shakin' them whoopie cakes, right up in my face
Can't help it, how you always cause a scene
with your.......... Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans....
Repeat Chorus
V3
Come on girls, lets cut loose
show me how, you move that tush caboose
Get down with the band, throw up your hands
Mercy boys she's a dancin' machine
I want more............. Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans
Repeat Chorus
Yeah
Tag
Oooh yeah, alright, Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans,
gotta get me some, Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans
Yeah, yeah, yeah c'mon....
gimme, gimme, gimme,gimme......Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans
(Spoken)
That's right boys, we ain't done yet...,
lets show em our biggest asssssssss...(slide guitar)........set (pause)
(Sung) Cold Beer.... and Skinny Jeans............ Yeah Cold Beer and Skinny Jeans
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